改写病句：One of Jenny ’greatest s joys in life is eating desserts. Such as milkshake, cookies or strawberry cake.
One of Jenny’s greatest joys in life is eating desserts, such as milkshake, cookies or strawberry cake.
改写病句：While driving on Blueberry Avenue yesterday afternoon, a tree fell toward Jack
While Jack was driving on Blueberry Avenue yesterday afternoon, a tree fell toward Jack’s car.
改写病句：Shakespeare wrote comedies, tragedies, romances, and the plays which were based on historical events.
Shakespeare wrote comedies, tragedies, romances, and some plays which were based on historical events.
改写病句：In summer, Juanna didn ’t love traveling in Rome she felt it was too hot there.
In summer, Juanna didn’t love traveling in Rome because she felt it was too hot there.
重写句子：We lived in a small town when I was a small child. We moved to Shanghai later. My father landed a better job there.(compound-complex sentence)
We lived in a small town when I was a small child, and we moved to Shanghai later because my father landed a better job there.
重写句子：At the international museum, you can find ancient Egyptian art. You can explore African artifacts there. You can discover beautiful textiles from around the world there.(parallel structure)
At the international museum, you can find ancient Egyptian art, explore African artifacts, discover beautiful textiles from around the world.
重写句子：We slipped on the road when we could see no lights in the heavy rain that night.(periodic sentence)
When we could see no lights in the heavy rain that night, we slipped on the road.
重写句子：Fossil fuels are non-renewable. We need to find alternative energy sources. (compound sentence)
Fossil fuels are non-renewable, so we need to find alternative energy sources.
重写句子：Alan passed the test. Alan had studied hard. Alan had understood the material.(complex sentence)
Alan passed the test because Alan had studied hard and understood the material.
重写句子：When we are relieved of working pressures of the office, we can enjoy happiness and relaxation at home.(modifying phrase)
Relieved of working pressures of the office, we can enjoy happiness and relaxation at home.
重写句子：The teacher returned the homework. The teacher noticed the error.(complex sentence)
The teacher returned the homework when(after) she noticed the error.